Assignment Four - Task Three: Audience Feedback

From my focus group I had got a lot of useful feedback which I have taken into consideration. The feedback which I had found really useful is the criticisms by the audience because they give me many areas to improve upon like for example I had got one piece of feedback where someone said that I had to show my plot of the advertisement (as it was kind of bland), or that i should remove a jump cut that i had used in the middle of a scene. I also get given feedback that praise the advertisement, this is great because it also tells me what I should keep every time i create an advertisement or production piece like for example one person liked the way I created the slogan at the end of the advertisement and another liked the music I chosen and how it was integrated in the advert however this music might have some people that won't like it and I wont have been able to get their criticisms as the people in my focus group either liked or didn't mind the music.